yup, much better.

Wild, weird, wacky! It's definitely stream-o'consciousness and bizarre! But it looks cool, Scott. Looks like you're having some fun playing, that's for sure. [img]/resources/ubb/smile.gif[/img]

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Jeff Zugale
Pagan City Comics
www.pagancity.com

Proto The Pet was painted in an interesting style, but, for whatever reason, I really didn't get into the story.

Brad's Somber Mood, on the other hand, I'm finding to be riotously funny ... particularly Brad's dialogue.

Actually, he reminds me of the Whiners from Saturday Night Live (played by Joe Piscopo and Robin Duke). His dialogue has a more Bergmanesque flavor though. The coloring and characters suggest a suburban setting and bring back memories of American Beauty for me. Why
not take this in an American Beauty kinda direction? That would be too cool.

When does Mena Suvari show up? [img]/resources/ubb/biggrin.gif[/img]

Ben Adams, having fun after a very depressing week


[This message has been edited by Ben Adams (edited 09-25-2001).]

Just a note that "Brad's Somber Mood" is now complete.

The new strip, started today, is called "I Am The Most Beautiful Dog in The World."

I still don't understand why Brad's wife/significant other doesn't leave him. The story leaves too many unanswered questions for me -- bring these two back for a sequel already!

Oh well.