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#498864 - 09/11/02 09:24 AM
Re: 9/11: A Speech of Frustration
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Registered: 08/18/99
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Trying desperately to drag this discussion back on to the topic it started with:
Yesterday morning the local station I listen to (WOGL, Philadelphia) was asking listeners to call in with suggestions for readings at 9-11 memorials. The usual stuff was brought up--the Declaration of Independence, the Gettysburg Address.
The lines were closed by the time I tried but here's the suggestion I was going to make:
"The Bill of Rights, in a probably vain attempt to remind John Ashcroft of what it is he's supposed to be defending."
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#498865 - 09/11/02 09:35 AM
Re: 9/11: A Speech of Frustration
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Originally posted by Bill Lange: The only thing I want to say about today is I remember hearing people on TV and in the news saying they hope no one tries to take advantage of people because of the events. Perish the thought! Why, they're just honest entrepreneurs! Cheap-ass American flags are only two for a dollar today on the corner of 7th Avenue and 35th Street! (The doorman for our building bought three with which to decorate the lobby!) Much cheaper than in Macy's across the street! Yes indeedy, they're only doing us a service! - Elayne
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#498866 - 09/11/02 09:47 AM
Re: 9/11: A Speech of Frustration
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Originally posted by Otto Chelman:
It's certainly fitting to take time to reflect, but the best way to spend THIS 9/11 would be by trying to enjoy life and appreciate that you can enjoy it, instead of wallowing in sorrow. Can we emphasize that over and over again please instead of dealing with all the media sound bites?
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#498867 - 09/11/02 10:08 AM
Re: 9/11: A Speech of Frustration
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Originally posted by Pat ONeill: "The Bill of Rights, in a probably vain attempt to remind John Ashcroft of what it is he's supposed to be defending." Couldn't agree any more, Pat.
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#498868 - 09/11/02 10:20 AM
Re: 9/11: A Speech of Frustration
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Registered: 02/04/99
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Originally posted by Elayne Riggs:
Perish the thought! Why, they're just honest entrepreneurs! Cheap-ass American flags are only two for a dollar today on the corner of 7th Avenue and 35th Street! (The doorman for our building bought three with which to decorate the lobby!) Much cheaper than in Macy's across the street! Yes indeedy, they're only doing us a service!
- Elayne Hi, And remember, without those flags on your car, the terrorist won't know they didn't win. Bill Lange
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#498869 - 09/11/02 11:14 AM
Re: 9/11: A Speech of Frustration
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Registered: 03/27/02
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Originally posted by Samuel Catalino:
You were upset. Why put your comments in bold?
Thank you. I admire your sentence fragments. Nah, not upset -- just amused. Bold connotes emphasis, and an attempt to make clear to a reader of limited abilities the specifics of my point.
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#498870 - 09/11/02 11:16 AM
Re: 9/11: A Speech of Frustration
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Originally posted by Elayne Riggs:
Perish the thought! Why, they're just honest entrepreneurs! Cheap-ass American flags are only two for a dollar today on the corner of 7th Avenue and 35th Street! (The doorman for our building bought three with which to decorate the lobby!) Much cheaper than in Macy's across the street! Yes indeedy, they're only doing us a service!
And those cheap-ass U.S. flags are almost certainly manufactured by little Chinese girls who work their fingers to the bone in what amounts to total slavery.
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#498871 - 09/11/02 11:26 AM
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Originally posted by Turok Chelman:
And those cheap-ass U.S. flags are almost certainly manufactured by little Chinese girls who work their fingers to the bone in what amounts to total slavery. No shit. Somebody has to look into that.
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#498872 - 09/11/02 11:32 AM
Re: 9/11: A Speech of Frustration
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Originally posted by Turok Chelman:
Nah, not upset -- just amused.
Bold connotes emphasis, and an attempt to make clear to a reader of limited abilities the specifics of my point. You need to learn how to write properly if you want any reader to understand what you are communicating. It does seem you are struggling with your last sentence. Perhaps if you had used a verb after your 'and', you would have fared better. You were angry, just admit it. You aren't writing well either. Have a wonderful day!
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#498873 - 09/11/02 11:38 AM
Re: 9/11: A Speech of Frustration
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Registered: 03/27/02
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Originally posted by Samuel Catalino:
You need to learn how to write properly if you want any reader to understand what you are communicating.
It does seem you are struggling with your last sentence. Perhaps if you had used a verb after your 'and', you would have fared better.
I believe I've made myself clear, at least to most people; it's very difficult to "write down" sufficiently for some.
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