In an effort to move this along a little, and for my own curiosity, I did some rough stick-figure layouts from Hunter's script.

Clearly, I shouldn't quit my day job. I found it impossible to fit all that dialogue and action into one page, so i stretched it out to two pages, and even then it felt tight to me. I don't know how real comics artists used to do it in the days before decompression!

Oh, and I changed one character's name, just to avoid controversy.

I hope this inspires others to take a swing at this, and do a better job than I can. Good luck all!

I've got to do the lettering on mine to show how I had to overcome the same problems you did.

Gosh that doesn't sound like you're stalling at all. Just sayin'

I don't see YOUR entry, bigmouth.

Well you and I have that in common, but the difference between you and I is you claimed to have done one and I never agreed to do one. But you already new that.

Okay, so that was the deadline. I declare Peter the winner.

I think an argument could be made that you do some things better than Hunter or Ritchey. An argument could be made to say they do some things better than you. But I gotta say you're really not clearly "better" than they are. I think You guys are all really close.

So as far as you proving your claims of being "better," my vote, I'd say a tie, I couldn't pick a clear winner.

But that's just my opinion. I could be wrong.

I did like Peter's layout.

Seeing as how neither one of them offered up anything, yeah, you could be wrong.