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#587490 - 06/30/11 04:33 PM Re: InvestComics’ Deadly Tales: One and Done Anthology [Re: THE Anti-Hunter]
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that is the one yes.

And feel free to credit as Hunter adapting a poem by Alex Ness.

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#587491 - 06/30/11 04:41 PM Re: InvestComics’ Deadly Tales: One and Done Anthology [Re: Alexander Ness]
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Originally Posted By: Alexander Ness
that is the one yes.

And feel free to credit as Hunter adapting a poem by Alex Ness.


Here's my attempt at "Democracy". I didn't get it in 12 unfortunately.

"1.Open with us looking at the back of the hoplite warrior sitting on the rock on Marathon beach.
2.He takes off his helmet.
3.Now we cut to looking up at the hoplite warrior, bearded maybe, grissled, veteran of war, he stares outward.
4.Cut to the scene from the previous day where there’s a shot of feet running towards the water, and other feet chasing them.
5.Cut now to Emeror Darius sittings on a throne, Persian soldiers surrounding him.
6.Cut now to both factions shield to shield in battle.
7.Cut to where the hoplite now walks the beach, clean shores as you said Ness.
8.Cut to A Hoplite yelling in victory, holding up a trophy.
9.Cut to now w/ the hoplite sinking to his knees.
10.Close up on his face, his eyes as he stares at the sand.
11.On the sand a puddle of blood starts to pool…
12.Flashes of the future, politics, history moving forward.
13.Pull out to show a shadow of the hoplite now side profile, with an arrow sticking out of his side/gut.
14.Close back in on his face, he smiles and closes his eyes.
15.Lays down and rests for good."
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#587492 - 06/30/11 04:58 PM Re: InvestComics’ Deadly Tales: One and Done Anthology [Re: THE Anti-Hunter]
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I like it.
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#587493 - 06/30/11 05:09 PM Re: InvestComics’ Deadly Tales: One and Done Anthology [Re: Alexander Ness]
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Yea, your poems are pretty nice. Have you done a collection of them interpreted as sequential art yet?
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#587494 - 06/30/11 05:17 PM Re: InvestComics’ Deadly Tales: One and Done Anthology [Re: THE Anti-Hunter]
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No, not yet least ways.

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#587495 - 06/30/11 05:26 PM Re: InvestComics’ Deadly Tales: One and Done Anthology [Re: Alexander Ness]
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That's too bad man. Hope it happens one day.
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#587496 - 06/30/11 05:31 PM Re: InvestComics’ Deadly Tales: One and Done Anthology [Re: THE Anti-Hunter]
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I appreciate the kind words. Thank you.

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#587497 - 06/30/11 05:57 PM Re: InvestComics’ Deadly Tales: One and Done Anthology [Re: THE Anti-Hunter]
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Originally Posted By: THE Anti-Hunter
I could use a letterer to put Ness's poem in a series of caption boxes throughout this page. I'm thinking it'd be about six panels.

Anyone? Joe?
Sure, I would love to!

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#587498 - 06/30/11 05:58 PM Re: InvestComics’ Deadly Tales: One and Done Anthology [Re: Joe Lee]
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Originally Posted By: Joe Lee
Originally Posted By: THE Anti-Hunter
I could use a letterer to put Ness's poem in a series of caption boxes throughout this page. I'm thinking it'd be about six panels.

Anyone? Joe?
Sure, I would love to!


Sweet. Is Allen supposed to ink this?
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#587499 - 06/30/11 06:06 PM Re: InvestComics’ Deadly Tales: One and Done Anthology [Re: Alexander Ness]
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Originally Posted By: Alexander Ness
I appreciate the kind words. Thank you.
Oh stop. You write awesome. Not to mention you're good with words and stuff.

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